Aweso without ‘me’

There’s no ‘lovely’ without any ‘love’

No ‘yours’ either without ‘you’ in it

No ‘noteworthy’ till there is ‘worth’

‘Superior’ lost without ‘super’ in it

..

‘Joyous’ is incomplete without ‘us’

‘Miserable’ comes with ‘miser’ too

‘Liveliness’ is nothing till you ‘live’ it

‘Health’ is where you ‘heals’ you

..

No matter where life takes you,

There shall always be

A string in your hand

‘Awesome’ is nothing without ‘me’……

– Pritesh (my contribution to Dhonuk’s magazine)

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9 Comments

  1. Ashwin said,

    March 16, 2011 at 7:12 pm

    Nice one Di! 🙂

  2. Pritesh Dagur said,

    March 16, 2011 at 7:14 pm

    @ Ashwin: Oh my, the French silence found words? 😀

  3. Neha said,

    March 16, 2011 at 7:48 pm

    I like! Super 🙂
    Specially like:
    ‘Joyous’ is incomplete without ‘us’

  4. aditi said,

    March 16, 2011 at 8:39 pm

    awesome!

  5. Shamit said,

    March 17, 2011 at 7:23 am

    Very different from your poetry in form, but not in substance!

  6. Karthik said,

    March 17, 2011 at 8:01 am

    Good one Pritesh !

  7. Pritesh said,

    March 19, 2011 at 11:24 am

    Thanks Neha, Aditi, Shamit and Karthik 🙂

  8. Baukje said,

    November 2, 2011 at 3:01 pm

    thank you for thinking it
    Greetings Baukje

  9. Pritesh said,

    November 2, 2011 at 3:03 pm

    Thank you Baukje! 🙂


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