Because I love you most of all

……………………………..

We always hurt the one we love the most,

The one we mustn’t hurt at all
We always break the heart kindest to us
With words we can not even recall
.
We crush the petals of our favourite rose
Until they crumble, on our feet they fall
So, if I broke your heart yesterday,
It’s because I love you most of all

………………………………………..

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13 Comments

  1. anju said,

    January 13, 2011 at 3:26 pm

    hey pritz…a very profound and true poem. thanks for sharing it.

  2. Karthik said,

    January 13, 2011 at 4:33 pm

    Touching poem Pritesh…simple and poignant !

  3. laasya said,

    January 13, 2011 at 5:31 pm

    hey pritz, very nice and how true! the perfect length, too.

  4. DDey said,

    January 13, 2011 at 5:53 pm

    Awesome Pritesh! 🙂 Very touching…

  5. Parvathy said,

    January 13, 2011 at 6:05 pm

    The title says it all!

  6. igor darwin said,

    January 13, 2011 at 9:49 pm

    Bittersweet. And very nice.

  7. Pushpa said,

    January 14, 2011 at 9:59 am

    Very well said.

  8. Pritesh said,

    January 14, 2011 at 10:30 am

    @ Anju: Thanks Anju 🙂 Glad you liked it
    @ Karthik: Thank you 🙂
    @ Laas: Ya, I wanted to convey it all in the minimum words possible 🙂
    @ DDey: Thank you
    @ Parvathy: 🙂
    @ Igor Darwin: Thanks!
    @ Amma: Thank you Amma 🙂

  9. Sujit said,

    January 17, 2011 at 5:18 am

    Very nice poem.

  10. JD said,

    March 7, 2011 at 7:26 am

    Well said Pritesh!

  11. Pritesh said,

    March 7, 2011 at 11:39 am

    Thanks Sujit and Jaydeep 🙂

  12. chetana said,

    March 31, 2011 at 5:35 am

    awesome poem.

  13. Pritesh said,

    March 31, 2011 at 9:50 am

    Thanks Chetana 🙂


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