Baby, come back

You shine and laugh and talk
Eyes glued on you, you enchant
And I stand here, looking
At you, your charms unfold
.
Your lips, wrapped in colour
Roll out words of beauty
But when it comes to us
They just purse and freeze
.
Those eyes, glittering and wild
Move from face to face
But when it comes to us
They just glaze and look away
.
Those fingers you move
As gestures to emphasize
Just move up and signal
That you don’t wish to speak to me
.
Oh baby, you’re too busy
Being famous, being loved
To know that you’ve ceased loving
Me and everything about us
.
Move those lips to talk about us
Those eyes to look at us
Those fingers to tell me
That we still are in love
.
Baby, please come back to me
Shed that glamour and fame
And see the simple love
You and I shared, what seems like a long time ago……………
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6 Comments

  1. Ashwin said,

    March 15, 2010 at 2:54 am

    really nice one !

  2. DDey said,

    March 15, 2010 at 3:23 am

    Fabulous!!! Keep going dear!! Love reading you!

  3. nitesh said,

    March 15, 2010 at 11:08 am

    nice nice ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Shamit said,

    March 15, 2010 at 3:11 pm

    One more complex one!! Well composed verses.

  5. Pritesh said,

    March 15, 2010 at 3:57 pm

    Thanks Ashwin, DDey, Baba and Shamit. ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. Gowri said,

    March 20, 2010 at 9:45 pm

    Pritz, i felt as if i am reading my heart…!!!!!!!!Believe me Siddharth and Sneha make me feel the same all round the day…Good one. Hope to have more from your end..


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