As I walked, with my world in and on my mind
Faces looked at me and looked away
Some lingered on for a trifle longer
Some leering, some uncaring, some indifferent
.
I walked on, clutching at my world tighter
For, I didn’t want these faces to peer into it
Some faces smiled slyly at me
And I rushed forward, pretending not to notice
.
The sea of faces surrounded me from all sides
I flailed my hands, trying to surface
The walls closed aroud me
And the portraits on these walls stifled me
.
And then, came this wrinkled face
Old, maybe even tired
But the smile took my breath away
She smiled at me, as if she understood
.
My desperation to flee from these faces
Her eyes gleamed understanding as she smiled on
Time froze around me as my thoughts flowed
I smiled back, my heart and soul into it
.
For that fraction of a second, all faded
All that remained was me and that smile
The leers forgotten, the sly smiles buried
The world lit up, bright and cheerful
.
I walked on, to pursue what I wanted
But the smile remained, etched on my face
For I shall never forget, that stranger’s smile
The droplet that pushed the ocean back……………….
.
- Pritesh
(This incident is from my life when a smile from an old lady brightened my day……….)
Ananth said,
December 24, 2007 at 12:22 pm
Wow!!!! I love this one! Very very good poem and thought!!!
Shamit said,
December 24, 2007 at 12:52 pm
Awesome!! Very nice … Felt good after reading it.
Sujit said,
December 27, 2007 at 3:40 pm
Well done Pritesh. A touching thought.
Tata said,
December 31, 2007 at 3:22 pm
Maybe i’m a little dumb, but i don’t realize why this is called a poem. Is it because it’s organized into groups of 4 lines?